tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-327614151421187161.post1365092956643242604..comments2023-06-29T04:40:36.310-05:00Comments on BOOK BEAT BABES: Trying A New Tactic! by DL LarsonMorgan Mandelhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10118929301591850918noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-327614151421187161.post-28245244287817881252015-02-16T10:46:29.362-06:002015-02-16T10:46:29.362-06:00Thanks! I'll take your advice! I mostly wanted...Thanks! I'll take your advice! I mostly wanted to show the 2 part story without using the same technique - so I thought of one liners. Deb Larsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14115066586448611470noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-327614151421187161.post-8515227767948913082015-02-07T18:57:23.591-06:002015-02-07T18:57:23.591-06:00For a query letter, you almost seem to have too mu...For a query letter, you almost seem to have too much information. Maybe pare down some of the 'newbie investigator...' lines into something more like an elevator pitch: one or two sentences. Then, let the synopsis and first chapter speak in greater depth about the story.<br /><br />All in all, I'm intrigued and would want to read more!Debra St. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07154130275058459169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-327614151421187161.post-27678440065115546852015-02-07T11:49:01.750-06:002015-02-07T11:49:01.750-06:00125,000, wow that's a lot of words! I'm gl...125,000, wow that's a lot of words! I'm glad if I can eke out 20-25,000 for novellas these days.Morgan Mandelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10118929301591850918noreply@blogger.com